But it wasn't quite 'done'.
here's the original again.
(if you want to see close up details, click on the pic above. the picture below is a lower res so if you click on it, you can see the whole image bigger and without scrolling)
im happy with this one, at least for today, but if you still have comments or suggestions, feel free to still make them. I have a few more paintings in progress, all at different stages.... so critique #2 is coming soon!
for more fun, here is another painting i recently finished.